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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Now I understand that you have limited options with your animation software, but there are still some things that I think are kind of off, and not because of that. I don't like how slowly the rain moves and, although all of it is angled down-right, some of it moves straight down. That doesn't really make sense eh?
Regardless, it's a really cool animation and an excellent original image (which I'm pretty sure you made so props).
But to those who are insulting those who point out flaws in this piece... yes, it has flaws, get over it. Like the author said you should be accepting of constructive criticism... I haven't seen any flaming but maybe I'm just missing it.
Firstly, the image itself is lovely as is. Even if it weren't animated. You picked a good picture to work with animation on. I've always loved pictures that kind of faded from a foreground to a background. The ripples actually look very realistic and at first glance I thought this was a real rainfall.
To be quite frank, I never even noticed that it doesn't loop smoothly. That's the nice thing about rain. Rain falls at such a random pace that its so easy to work with. That also makes it easy to make the ripples even though they don't match the rain. You barely notice the few flaws unless you either look at it for a long time or are a major perfectionist.
I have nothing negative to say and I hope you continue to make amazing things like this. And congrats on the Daily Deviation. :3
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